Kommt auf den Tag bzw. die momentane Verfassung an.
Im Moment bin ich wieder extrem am Charakter zeichnen und Kurzgeschichten schreiben. Manchmal läuft aber auch gar nix.
Ich versuche immer gerade irgendworan zu arbeiten. Zum einen lenkt es ab, zum anderen ist es höchsterstaunlich wie sich Gedanken verknüpfen wenn man von groben Charakterumrissen zu spezifischem Verhalten kommt.
Im Moment meine Lieblingsfigur:
(Tony): Single life. Cars, women and alcohol.
Tony (Off): You know, I was taught that you can’t buy people or feelings. That there are some things in life you have to work for.
That suddenly changed about one hour after I got my first million. Nothing you ever want, nothing you rest your eyes on is really unattainable.
Women, cars, people in general – they are all buyable.
There is no desperation or heartbreak in my life. If I want the woman of my dreams, I go out, make her an offer and take her home with me.
If it bothers me? Living a lie. No. It isn’t a lie If you choose it to be, right?
A woman enters the room.
Maria: So, how is your life today?
He smiles.
Tony: As always.
Tony (Off): Wait. I need to correct myself. There is one thing in my life I can never reach. One thing not all the money in the world could buy – her. No matter how much Ferrari’s I’ve got in the garage, no matter how big my estate is – above all I want her. But I can never reach her. She is beyond me.
Hat ungefähr 10 Minuten gedauert um das zu schreiben und schon hat man die grobe Charakterzeichnung einer interessanten Figur. Tight.
Ist übrigens ein Protagonist meiner nächsten Serie.
Kommt auf den Tag bzw. die momentane Verfassung an.
Im Moment bin ich wieder extrem am Charakter zeichnen und Kurzgeschichten schreiben. Manchmal läuft aber auch gar nix.
Ich versuche immer gerade irgendworan zu arbeiten. Zum einen lenkt es ab, zum anderen ist es höchsterstaunlich wie sich Gedanken verknüpfen wenn man von groben Charakterumrissen zu spezifischem Verhalten kommt.
Im Moment meine Lieblingsfigur:
Hat ungefähr 10 Minuten gedauert um das zu schreiben und schon hat man die grobe Charakterzeichnung einer interessanten Figur. Tight.
Ist übrigens ein Protagonist meiner nächsten Serie.
Interessante Paralelle, daran hab ich noch gar nicht gedacht. Ja, meine Figur geht etwas in die Richtung, aber ist noch um einiges dunkler und hat im Gegensatz zu DiNozzo "ein größeres Ziel". ;-)
Interessante Paralelle, daran hab ich noch gar nicht gedacht. Ja, meine Figur geht etwas in die Richtung, aber ist noch um einiges dunkler und hat im Gegensatz zu DiNozzo "ein größeres Ziel". ;-)
So Kinder, ich hau meine Geschichten jetzt an jeden raus der sie irgendwie lesen könnte, muss mich ja auf mein Drehbuch-Studium einstellen.
Hier mal wieder was von mir. Sorry, ist alles auf Englisch (auch das Hintergrundwissen) da ich das in nem amerikanischen Forum gepostet habe. Sollte man aber mit Schul-Englisch ganz gut verstehen.
Danke an alle die es sich durchlesen, finde ich super!
Kritik ist sehr gerne gesehen.
Hey there everbody.
First of all, I'd like to say that I really enjoy this forum. Other geeky people to discuss about our favourite television series and a lot of people that actually want to see more than meets the eye and grasp these series beyond superficiality.
SO, to me, it makes sense that you are the first people in the world (!) to ever get the chance to read my own series I created.
Some facts beforehand:
1. English is not my native tongue - please excuse any grammatical and/or spelling mistakes.
2. Please feel free to post any critisicm at all (praise is very welcome as well )
3. Creating your own universe is quite difficult, please overlook the fact that some details are quite similar to already existing series/franchises. It works out fine (in my head )
4. Thank you very much for reading this!
So, you read this far. I presume you really want to read it.
Here we go:
The series is basically about a couple of high school students (their names being Xander, Matt, Amy, Dawn and their mentor - Foster) that are, by accident, equipped with superpowers such as telekinsesis, pyrokinesis, superhuman strength, empathy and so on.
Of course they get together to form an Alliance against evil and try to use their powers to save the world.
I'll give you a sample of an episode of the first season (of 5 in all). It's not that complex, you get a good insight on the characters and their relationship.
Excuse the incoherent writing, I didn't manage to write a full 40 minutes episode, so we'll have to go with what we got.
Here it is:
1x17 Kryptonite
Xander, by coincidence, finds a small and glowing stone. He touches it and looses his superpowers. He has to struggle with the disappearance of his powers and doesnt feel like a fully member of the X-Men anymore.
1 LIBRARY DAY INT.
DAWN
(Staring in her physics book.)
Im always fascinated about how tiny, little items can have such a tremendous impact on life.
I mean lets take atoms for example. Something we cannot even see or fully understand, and yet in the wrong hands, it can destroy the word.
AMY
One of the mysteries of life, I guess.
DAWN
Of course, but how are we supposed to make the right decisions if there are so many factors and obstacles we cannot even remotely sense. I mean its like a whole world we cannot hope to understand.
AMY
I guess life is complicated. You can never know anything, may It be physics, chemistry or people, you can never fully grasp what is going on.
DAWN
How did we get to this point of the conversation?
AMY
(Looking at her as if realizing something embarrassing)
I dont know. You brought it up.
MATT
(Entering the room.)
Ah, I see. Some of us try to cheat their flunking classes by learning. This is manipulation in the essence if you ask me.
AMY
Just because some of us actually intend to get through high school.
MATT
I do, too. But how can you know what you really can by pressing stuff into your brain? Its a deception.
AMY
(Looking into her book.)
You became really good in justifying your horrible grades.
MATT
I should be after 4 years.
Listen girls, Im gonna see you later, right?
DAWN
What are you doing?
MATT
Checking on Xand.
DAWN
How is he?
MATT
I think we slowly rise from Shattered to Broken. Progress.
DAWN
Tell him tell him I dont know. Something about care and missing and sorry and words like that.
MATT
I will. Later
2 HALLWAY DAY INT.
MATT
Hey. Howre you doin?
XANDER
Do you want me to lie to you?
MATT
Surprise me.
XANDER
Im fine.
MATT
And the truth?
XANDER
That was the truth. Im fine. Really. Well, not fine in the common sense, but fine in the I dont think Im gonna die from this fine.
MATT
Can I help you in a way?
XANDER
As long as you dont have a Delorian no, but thanks.
Wait, you dont have a Delorian, do you?
MATT
Sorry.
XANDER
Never mind. Never got my hopes up anyway.
MATT
You sure you gonna be alright?
XANDER
Is there an alternative?
OPENING CREDITS
3 CAFETERIA INT. DAY
KATHERINE
I swear to God, one more minute in this dull history class and Im gonna reenact Second World War. I mean, what are we supposed to learn there anyway? Stuff that happened like 2000 years ago? Romans and stuff like that? Like someones even speaking Romanian anymore, duh.
ELENA
(Whispering)
Or, like, Latin.
KATHERINE
Whatd you say?
ELENA
Never mind.
KATHERINE
You okay? You seem a little bit distracted since youre back on the team. Still thinking about the Master of Nerds?
ELENA
What? Storm? Forget it. I cannot even remember his first name.
KATHERINE
Thats the spirit. Besides, I can see the sparkles between you and Thomas again.
(Poking her with her elbow)
Do we get back to the way we used to be?
ELENA
(Smiling at Katherine.)
Maybe?
(She stops at her locker, Katherine walks by slowly.)
KATHERINE
But if you do think about him you better get over it.
ELENA
There is nothing to get over.
(As Katherine is gone, telling herself.)
I never figured lying is that easy.
INT. FOSTERS BOOKSTORE - NIGHT
FOSTER
We should get going.
AMY
Lets go.
DAWN
Are you gonna be alright?
XANDER
Yeah, yeah. Sure. Ill just arrange the books in alphabetical order or something else funny.
MATT
Well be back soon. Dont mind.
XANDER
Yeah. Now get going, youve got a job to do.
DAWN
See you later. Take care.
XANDER
I used to tell you that.
AMY
Then its our turn now.
(Matt, Amy, Dawn and Foster leave the room.)
XANDER
Dammit, I dont recall being normal was that boring.
INT. CAFÉ DAY
XANDER
Thank you for taking the time.
DAWN
Dont mention it.
XANDER
Being alone is not very helping right now.
DAWN
Im sorry for what happened to you. She
XANDER
Nah, this is nor topic for us. No offence, but I should keep this to myself.
DAWN
Fine. You alright with everything else?
XANDER
Well, I lost my telekinesis, so, not that good.
DAWN
Im sure its just temporary.
XANDER
And what if it isnt? What If I can never rejoin the team properly.
DAWN
You will always be a part of the team. Youre our leader.
XANDER
You dont need me. Matt seems to be doing the leader job really well. With my powers being gone I am useless to you, I would just slow you down.
DAWN
I need you.
(Both share an emotional moment.)
And I think you are a hero, with powers or without. It doesnt matter how strong we are or how intense our powers are, being a hero takes something you definitely have courage.
Besides, Foster is already looking for a way to bring your powers back. And I am sure he will succeed.
XANDER
(He takes her hand and squeezes it gently.)
Thank you.
DAWN
(Squeezing back.)
Youre welcome.
Thank you very much for reading this, If you have any questions or comments - spill it out.
Mein Thriller ist mittlerweile auf 112 Seiten angeschwollen. Mit'n bissel Glück könnte ich in einem Jahr fertig werden :-D
Außerdem habe ich eine tragischkomödische Fortsetzungsgeschichte angefangen. Hatte ich eigentlich einmal vorgehabt in Blogform zu posten. Mal sehen, ob ich das noch mache...
Habe eben Seite 200 erreicht! :cheers:Wie geil. Bin im letzten Kapitel. Meien Prognose war ziemlich gut. Bin innerhalb eines Jahres wirklich FAST fertig geworden mit der (Roh-)Geschichte. Dann noch Fienschliff und gut is' ;-)
Habe eben Seite 200 erreicht! :cheers:Wie geil. Bin im letzten Kapitel. Meien Prognose war ziemlich gut. Bin innerhalb eines Jahres wirklich FAST fertig geworden mit der (Roh-)Geschichte. Dann noch Fienschliff und gut is' ;-)
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